Sunday, October 14, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 14/10/12 ~ More Than Friends #1

This is my first time participating in Six Sentence Sunday. I'm posting my Six Sentences from my new romantic comedy, More Than Friends. It's a friends to lovers story and Lily, my heroine, has just turned up at the hero's apartment to give him a piece of her mind!

“Open up, ya louse!”

Justin Knight’s apartment door rattled under a hammering fist.

He yanked it open to find Lily Harper—irate and slightly unsteady on her feet—in the hall outside his door. She glowered at him with the indomitable intent of an avenging angel.

Despite the menacing scowl, her emerald eyes were as stunning as he remembered, and his male hormones jerked to life. It was after ten p.m. and she reeked of booze, but the sight of her stalled his breath in his throat.
Copyright Monique DeVere 2012

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  1. Interesting setup here. Now I'm wondering why she's turned up drunk?

  2. Welcome to Six Sunday! I would imagine this scene was every home-alone guy's dream. Like it!

  3. Awesome! Nice to see you for Six Sunday!

    What a yummy story!

  4. Welcome to six sentence sunday. Its a fun way play on the blogosphere. Love the setup. Looks like Justin really has had more than friendship in mind for a bit. Wonder what's got her so pissed off she needed liquid courage to address. Fun six.

  5. Welcome to SSS Monique! Great to see you here. Enjoyed your six and congrats on your release :)

  6. Awwww, sweet moment (the caught in his throat thing).

  7. Thanks, everyone. I'm enjoying the SSS!!

  8. Welcome to SSS, Monique! Something tells me she's going to regret this moment in the morning. Love seeing it from his POV.


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